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3:07 his eyes on her
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Mooch
2003-08-02 22:25:48 UTC
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3:07 SanFranAmsterdamn
in my head
ain't real just tryin' to relate... (time)

this artist
guards his muse

she...
sound a-sleep-a
in the bed.

twitchin' brow
shakin' eyes under their lids

dreaming under a telepatic suggestion
warm psychic snugglin'

he keeps his third eye on her...

keeps her safe
samurai in his thoughts
while she plays in hers
reorganizing the sheets around her body

he loves to kiss her eyelids
while she's far away from here
Buzz
2003-08-05 21:40:28 UTC
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very much enjoyed this piece, especially this passage:

he keeps his third eye on her...

keeps her safe
samurai in his thoughts
while she plays in hers
reorganizing the sheets around her body
Buzz<
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MummyChunk
2025-03-28 01:34:52 UTC
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Post by Mooch
3:07 SanFranAmsterdamn
in my head
ain't real just tryin' to relate... (time)
this artist
guards his muse
she...
sound a-sleep-a
in the bed.
twitchin' brow
shakin' eyes under their lids
dreaming under a telepatic suggestion
warm psychic snugglin'
he keeps his third eye on her...
keeps her safe
samurai in his thoughts
while she plays in hers
reorganizing the sheets around her body
he loves to kiss her eyelids
while she's far away from here
Mooch - August 2003


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