Coil / Will Dockery

[W.Dockery]

Coil
This coil of pain
memory burns
with flashing image
and haunting misses.
Distinct dream vision
mixed up with consciousness
a train seems right on top of me
the conductor has an agenda.
Only the gods see beyond this veil
I've seen those eyes
red blazing and shaking.
No time to think,
no desire to.
There seems to be a wide awake
slow ride
consciousness carries
stretches through these years
these days... this minute.
As if the night could purify
rather than corrupt
my reptilian hands
my repetition in signs.
-Will Dockery (2003)

Here is a Will Dockery gem

Thanks again for reading and commenting, MC.

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[W.Dockery]

Coil
This coil of pain
memory burns
with flashing image
and haunting misses.
Distinct dream vision
mixed up with consciousness
train seems right on top of me
conductor has an agenda.
Only the Gods see beyond this veil
I saw those eyes
red blazing and shaking.
No time to think,
no desire to.
There seems to be a wide awake
slow ride
consciousness carries
stretches through these years
these days... this minute.
As if the night could purify
rather than corrupt
my reptilian hands
my repetition in signs.
-Will Dockery (c)2003

Here is a Will Dockery gem

What makes it a gem

Do you have a critique that shows it isn't a gem?

If so post proof or shut the fuck up, as the old Usenet saying goes,
troll.

HTH and HAND.

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