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Diver Days / a poem by Will Dockery
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Will Dockery
2018-05-31 23:40:01 UTC
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Diver Days

Cross legged, she sits.
Red wine, friends.
Mellowness & memories.

She seems
to have a crisis of faith,
but she's also sort of a
Prima Dona it seems.
A bit absurd with it.

Seems to be
doing better on this one,
this faster rocking gospel plow;
needing to use less octaves.

It's got the crowd
up and clapping,
Brother Dave almost jumps.

Is it important,
or really?
Just go right through it.

-Will Dockery
Peter J Ross
2018-06-02 18:52:04 UTC
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In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Thu, 31 May 2018 19:40:01 -0400, Will
Post by Will Dockery
Prima Dona it seems.
How many years ago did I point out your misspelling of "prima donna"?

How many thousands of times will you repost the same garbage without
correcting even that single moronic mistake?
--
PJR :-)

τὸν οἰόμενον νόον ἔχειν ὁ νουθετέων ματαιοπονεῖ.
- Democritus
Cujo DeSockpuppet
2018-06-02 19:27:28 UTC
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Post by Peter J Ross
In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Thu, 31 May 2018 19:40:01 -0400, Will
Post by Will Dockery
Prima Dona it seems.
How many years ago did I point out your misspelling of "prima donna"?
How many thousands of times will you repost the same garbage without
correcting even that single moronic mistake?
That would be the "end of infinity plus 20 years". Good luck trying to
explain to Dreckster that the "end of infinity plus 20 years" is equal to
the "end of infinity". That might actually take longer.
--
Cujo - The Official Overseer of Kooks and Trolls in dfw.*,
alt.paranormal, alt.astrology and alt.astrology.metapsych. Supreme Holy
Overlord of alt.fucknozzles. Winner of the 8/2000, 2/2003 & 4/2007 HL&S
award. July 2005 Hammer of Thor. Winning Trainer - Barbara Woodhouse
Memorial Dog Whistle - 12/2005 & 4/2008. COOSN-266-06-01895.
"So what does that make you? A stalker who stalks an asshole for 7
years now trying to convince others how bad he is?" - Ed the asshole
Peter J Ross
2018-06-02 20:12:02 UTC
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In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Sat, 2 Jun 2018 19:27:28 +0000 (UTC),
Post by Cujo DeSockpuppet
Post by Peter J Ross
In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Thu, 31 May 2018 19:40:01 -0400, Will
Post by Will Dockery
Prima Dona it seems.
How many years ago did I point out your misspelling of "prima donna"?
How many thousands of times will you repost the same garbage without
correcting even that single moronic mistake?
That would be the "end of infinity plus 20 years". Good luck trying to
explain to Dreckster that the "end of infinity plus 20 years" is equal to
the "end of infinity". That might actually take longer.
Not at all! I'm sure he'll give up spamming illiterate dreck within a
mere (SQRT(infinity)^2)+15 years.
--
PJR :-)

τὸν οἰόμενον νόον ἔχειν ὁ νουθετέων ματαιοπονεῖ.
- Democritus
Cujo DeSockpuppet
2018-06-02 22:15:16 UTC
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Post by Peter J Ross
In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Sat, 2 Jun 2018 19:27:28 +0000 (UTC),
Post by Cujo DeSockpuppet
Post by Peter J Ross
In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Thu, 31 May 2018 19:40:01 -0400, Will
Post by Will Dockery
Prima Dona it seems.
How many years ago did I point out your misspelling of "prima donna"?
How many thousands of times will you repost the same garbage without
correcting even that single moronic mistake?
That would be the "end of infinity plus 20 years". Good luck trying
to explain to Dreckster that the "end of infinity plus 20 years" is
equal to the "end of infinity". That might actually take longer.
Not at all! I'm sure he'll give up spamming illiterate dreck within a
mere (SQRT(infinity)^2)+15 years.
You're an optimist. It's at least double that.
--
Cujo - The Official Overseer of Kooks and Trolls in dfw.*,
alt.paranormal, alt.astrology and alt.astrology.metapsych. Supreme Holy
Overlord of alt.fucknozzles. Winner of the 8/2000, 2/2003 & 4/2007 HL&S
award. July 2005 Hammer of Thor. Winning Trainer - Barbara Woodhouse
Memorial Dog Whistle - 12/2005 & 4/2008. COOSN-266-06-01895.
"I can see why you have difficulty understanding why I am a babe
magnet" - Edmo understates the facts.
Peter J Ross
2018-06-02 22:46:34 UTC
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In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Sat, 2 Jun 2018 22:15:16 +0000 (UTC),
Post by Cujo DeSockpuppet
Post by Peter J Ross
In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Sat, 2 Jun 2018 19:27:28 +0000 (UTC),
Post by Cujo DeSockpuppet
Post by Peter J Ross
In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Thu, 31 May 2018 19:40:01 -0400, Will
Post by Will Dockery
Prima Dona it seems.
How many years ago did I point out your misspelling of "prima donna"?
Note: still no response from the Dreckweasel.
Post by Cujo DeSockpuppet
Post by Peter J Ross
Post by Cujo DeSockpuppet
Post by Peter J Ross
How many thousands of times will you repost the same garbage without
correcting even that single moronic mistake?
Note: still no response from the Dreckweasel.
Post by Cujo DeSockpuppet
Post by Peter J Ross
Post by Cujo DeSockpuppet
That would be the "end of infinity plus 20 years". Good luck trying
to explain to Dreckster that the "end of infinity plus 20 years" is
equal to the "end of infinity". That might actually take longer.
Not at all! I'm sure he'll give up spamming illiterate dreck within a
mere (SQRT(infinity)^2)+15 years.
You're an optimist. It's at least double that.
The heat death of the universe.

Dreckery behaving like a decent human being.

Which will come first?
--
PJR :-)

τὸν οἰόμενον νόον ἔχειν ὁ νουθετέων ματαιοπονεῖ.
- Democritus
Cujo DeSockpuppet
2018-06-02 23:40:41 UTC
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Post by Peter J Ross
In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Sat, 2 Jun 2018 22:15:16 +0000 (UTC),
Post by Cujo DeSockpuppet
Post by Peter J Ross
In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Sat, 2 Jun 2018 19:27:28 +0000 (UTC),
Post by Cujo DeSockpuppet
Post by Peter J Ross
In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Thu, 31 May 2018 19:40:01 -0400,
Post by Will Dockery
Prima Dona it seems.
How many years ago did I point out your misspelling of "prima donna"?
Note: still no response from the Dreckweasel.
Post by Cujo DeSockpuppet
Post by Peter J Ross
Post by Cujo DeSockpuppet
Post by Peter J Ross
How many thousands of times will you repost the same garbage
without correcting even that single moronic mistake?
Note: still no response from the Dreckweasel.
Post by Cujo DeSockpuppet
Post by Peter J Ross
Post by Cujo DeSockpuppet
That would be the "end of infinity plus 20 years". Good luck trying
to explain to Dreckster that the "end of infinity plus 20 years"
is equal to the "end of infinity". That might actually take longer.
Not at all! I'm sure he'll give up spamming illiterate dreck within
a mere (SQRT(infinity)^2)+15 years.
You're an optimist. It's at least double that.
The heat death of the universe.
Dreckery behaving like a decent human being.
Which will come first?
Both will come before Dreckweasel wins an argument honestly.
--
Cujo - The Official Overseer of Kooks and Trolls in dfw.*,
alt.paranormal, alt.astrology and alt.astrology.metapsych. Supreme Holy
Overlord of alt.fucknozzles. Winner of the 8/2000, 2/2003 & 4/2007 HL&S
award. July 2005 Hammer of Thor. Winning Trainer - Barbara Woodhouse
Memorial Dog Whistle - 12/2005 & 4/2008. COOSN-266-06-01895.
"I'll bet anything many these abusers are ex-military, because they
exhibit that mindless "force, control and towing the line is everything"
idiotic mentality that has destroyed our world for eons now."
- Eddy the Paranoid Kook.
Will Dockery
2018-06-03 22:39:58 UTC
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Post by Will Dockery
Prima Dona it seems.
Thanks for the scrutiny, Peter, this inspired my rewrite:

Diver Days

Cross legged,
she sits.

Red wine, friends.
Mellowness
and memories.

She seems
to have a crisis of faith.

She's also
sort of a Prima Donna
it seems.

A bit absurd with it.

Seems to be
doing better
on this one.

This faster rocking
Gospel Plow.

Needing to use less octaves.

It's got the crowd
up and clapping,
Brother Dave almost jumps.

Is it important,
or really?

Just go right through it.

-Will Dockery

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Peter J Ross
2018-06-05 16:09:28 UTC
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In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Sun, 3 Jun 2018 18:39:58 -0400, Will
Post by Will Dockery
Prima Donna
Astonishing!

But let's wait a while. I bet that within weeks, if not days, you'll
be posting the misspelt version again.

This is because even you can't be bothered to read your spew before
posting it.
--
PJR :-)

τὸν οἰόμενον νόον ἔχειν ὁ νουθετέων ματαιοπονεῖ.
- Democritus
Will Dockery
2018-10-28 22:16:09 UTC
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Post by Peter J Ross
But let's wait a while
You've been waiting for what now, six months, PJR?
Will Dockery
2018-10-29 11:20:10 UTC
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Post by Peter J Ross
Astonishing!
Okay, so you're not so bad after all, Peter.

:)

Will Dockery
2018-06-08 18:13:58 UTC
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The Usenet post edit is an old tradition, and PJR and Cujo use it nearly
every post.

Being an obvious joke, the joke being on the original poster, of course.
Will Dockery
2018-06-13 00:09:53 UTC
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Post by Peter J Ross
How many years ago
Since you became a worthless troll?

About 15-20.

;)
Will Dockery
2018-06-14 08:24:10 UTC
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Post by Peter J Ross
How many years ago
Did we meet?

Nearly twenty by now, Peter.
Will Dockery
2018-07-19 10:41:46 UTC
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Post by Peter J Ross
How many years ago did I point out your misspelling of "prima donna"?
Hopefully this is the last time...
Will Dockery
2018-07-24 19:15:36 UTC
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Post by Peter J Ross
In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Thu, 31 May 2018 19:40:01 -0400, Will
Post by Will Dockery
Prima Dona it seems.
How many years ago did I point out your misspelling of "prima donna"?
Enough that I should know by now... thanks for the heads up, Peter.
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